[quicwg/base-drafts] Terminology QUIC-Transport-24 (#3233)

Kazu Yamamoto <notifications@github.com> Thu, 14 November 2019 07:33 UTC

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- The word "host" is undefined. If it is equal to "endpoint", it should be replaced. Otherwise, "host" should" be defined in Sec 1.2.
- The word "address" sometime means "IP address" and "a pair of IP address and port" in other cases. Sec 1.2 should define "address" as "a pair of IP address and port". And "IP" should be added in front of "address" which means "IP address".

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