[quicwg/base-drafts] [HTTP/3] [editorial] Minor fix in GOAWAY wording. (#3906)

Bence Béky <notifications@github.com> Tue, 14 July 2020 18:58 UTC

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1. Move &quot;A client that is unable to retry requests [...]&quot; sentence from
the beginning of an entirely unrelated paragraph to somewhere more
appropriate.

2. Change Push ID requirement on subsequent GOAWAY frames.  This was
presumably an oversight, because &quot;An endpoint MAY send multiple GOAWAY
frames indicating different identifiers [...]&quot; paragraph above is pretty
clear and covers both directions already.
You can view, comment on, or merge this pull request online at:

  https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3906

-- Commit Summary --

  * [HTTP/3] [editorial] Minor fix in GOAWAY wording.

-- File Changes --

    M draft-ietf-quic-http.md (20)

-- Patch Links --

https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3906.patch
https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/3906.diff

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