[quicwg/base-drafts] 7a2b32: [qpack] rewrite abstract
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Branch: refs/heads/qpack-editorial-0519 Home: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts Commit: 7a2b32b867909802ec0ab12ec9df2c927dbd9d8d https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/7a2b32b867909802ec0ab12ec9df2c927dbd9d8d Author: Alan Frindell <afrind@fb.com> Date: 2019-05-28 (Tue, 28 May 2019) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md Log Message: ----------- [qpack] rewrite abstract Commit: 42f84f869484675b6e14fcfbd817c225eeb5b7ef https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/42f84f869484675b6e14fcfbd817c225eeb5b7ef Author: Alan Frindell <afrind@fb.com> Date: 2019-05-28 (Tue, 28 May 2019) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md Log Message: ----------- [qpack] Minor editorial pass Commit: 845b954dbbc0d5aba2bc0da1df17123900138177 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/845b954dbbc0d5aba2bc0da1df17123900138177 Author: Alan Frindell <afrind@fb.com> Date: 2019-05-28 (Tue, 28 May 2019) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md Log Message: ----------- [qpack] Prefer header blocks to H3 frame types I tried to leave the text compatible with extensions that define new frames and/or streams that carry header blocks Commit: 15080a2a2af79c1a7d9038461d9cdb1d7ceefa56 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/15080a2a2af79c1a7d9038461d9cdb1d7ceefa56 Author: Alan Frindell <afrind@fb.com> Date: 2019-05-28 (Tue, 28 May 2019) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md Log Message: ----------- [qpack] Reorder sections No text changes, only moved Blocked Decoding happens before State Synchronization Invalid References fits better in Decoder than Wire Format The encoder needs to send Set Dynamic Capacity first The decoder section flows better with HeaderAck/Cancel before ICI Commit: fafff2ff5e5be952a913a2e48db72bbf49730c0e https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/fafff2ff5e5be952a913a2e48db72bbf49730c0e Author: Alan Frindell <afrind@fb.com> Date: 2019-05-28 (Tue, 28 May 2019) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md Log Message: ----------- [qpack] Editorial Clarifications 1. Dynamic table entries can contain empty values 2. Encoder needs to send Set Dynamic Table Capacity to use the dynamic table 3. Removed a redundant condition from the eviction algorithm 4. Cancellation may need to be sent even after reading the end of stream 5. Improved description of Relative and Post-Base indices Commit: 8109398b312061fc786982bc4b0f76351bba3bb7 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/8109398b312061fc786982bc4b0f76351bba3bb7 Author: Alan Frindell <afrind@fb.com> Date: 2019-05-28 (Tue, 28 May 2019) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md Log Message: ----------- [qpack] Move some decoder text to the decoder section It was in the encoder section Commit: 665716913c7d641ba1b30e5c66777f5c9f6293d3 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/665716913c7d641ba1b30e5c66777f5c9f6293d3 Author: Alan Frindell <afrind@fb.com> Date: 2019-05-28 (Tue, 28 May 2019) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md Log Message: ----------- [qpack] Move some explanatory text from Wire Format to Decoder section Some editorial changes to the text Commit: 0700b86d5056d1eb138b80c378c9ee5321a06141 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/0700b86d5056d1eb138b80c378c9ee5321a06141 Author: Alan Frindell <afrind@fb.com> Date: 2019-05-28 (Tue, 28 May 2019) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md Log Message: ----------- [qpack] Make the instruction text more consistent * Use a consistent format for describing the insutrction/representation for all instructions in a given class * Make sure all the bits are described accurately in text since the drawings are non-normative * Clean up a little regular vs post-base language * Rewrote the intro section to encoder instructions Commit: add91327c5e3ba55d33dab6629c45f5dfdcc3a89 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/add91327c5e3ba55d33dab6629c45f5dfdcc3a89 Author: Alan Frindell <afrind@fb.com> Date: 2019-05-28 (Tue, 28 May 2019) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md Log Message: ----------- [qpack] Remove redundant stream text, update TOC Compare: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/compare/7a2b32b86790%5E...add91327c5e3