[quicwg/base-drafts] e2c4d4: [qpack] rewrite abstract
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Branch: refs/heads/qpack-editorial-0519 Home: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts Commit: e2c4d44a4cdcb3ac5bda9bc54b269a11286a2979 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/e2c4d44a4cdcb3ac5bda9bc54b269a11286a2979 Author: Alan Frindell <afrind@fb.com> Date: 2019-06-24 (Mon, 24 Jun 2019) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md Log Message: ----------- [qpack] rewrite abstract Commit: 308dbc1c383a7aedbf422dab18839bd7cdc56276 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/308dbc1c383a7aedbf422dab18839bd7cdc56276 Author: Alan Frindell <afrind@fb.com> Date: 2019-06-24 (Mon, 24 Jun 2019) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md Log Message: ----------- [qpack] Minor editorial pass Commit: 4b045a2ab407631513e1e6f4f56168c2d27e80f6 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/4b045a2ab407631513e1e6f4f56168c2d27e80f6 Author: Alan Frindell <afrind@fb.com> Date: 2019-06-24 (Mon, 24 Jun 2019) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md Log Message: ----------- [qpack] Prefer header blocks to H3 frame types I tried to leave the text compatible with extensions that define new frames and/or streams that carry header blocks Commit: 7c029d6424b8851454fcf1d22cbf580d934c3ffe https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/7c029d6424b8851454fcf1d22cbf580d934c3ffe Author: Alan Frindell <afrind@fb.com> Date: 2019-06-24 (Mon, 24 Jun 2019) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md Log Message: ----------- [qpack] Reorder sections No text changes, only moved Blocked Decoding happens before State Synchronization Invalid References fits better in Decoder than Wire Format The encoder needs to send Set Dynamic Capacity first The decoder section flows better with HeaderAck/Cancel before ICI Commit: 2849f52e46f0f2b4f6f5875e7bd510260e87964a https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/2849f52e46f0f2b4f6f5875e7bd510260e87964a Author: Alan Frindell <afrind@fb.com> Date: 2019-06-24 (Mon, 24 Jun 2019) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md Log Message: ----------- [qpack] Editorial Clarifications 1. Dynamic table entries can contain empty values 2. Encoder needs to send Set Dynamic Table Capacity to use the dynamic table 3. Removed a redundant condition from the eviction algorithm 4. Cancellation may need to be sent even after reading the end of stream 5. Improved description of Relative and Post-Base indices Commit: 7515f1bef07fcf9669b4e76e3d6657d25e9f3ca2 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/7515f1bef07fcf9669b4e76e3d6657d25e9f3ca2 Author: Alan Frindell <afrind@fb.com> Date: 2019-06-24 (Mon, 24 Jun 2019) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md Log Message: ----------- [qpack] Move some decoder text to the decoder section It was in the encoder section Commit: 57b6a8fb01a0977048d01736edc4766df1fedfe4 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/57b6a8fb01a0977048d01736edc4766df1fedfe4 Author: Alan Frindell <afrind@fb.com> Date: 2019-06-24 (Mon, 24 Jun 2019) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md Log Message: ----------- [qpack] Move some explanatory text from Wire Format to Decoder section Some editorial changes to the text Commit: edb694793023e0dc7da5ee1cac1e82ff8fd62b30 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/edb694793023e0dc7da5ee1cac1e82ff8fd62b30 Author: Alan Frindell <afrind@fb.com> Date: 2019-06-24 (Mon, 24 Jun 2019) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md Log Message: ----------- [qpack] Make the instruction text more consistent * Use a consistent format for describing the insutrction/representation for all instructions in a given class * Make sure all the bits are described accurately in text since the drawings are non-normative * Clean up a little regular vs post-base language * Rewrote the intro section to encoder instructions Commit: 002057185aac27ae0e7e3852ca610319827441d4 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/002057185aac27ae0e7e3852ca610319827441d4 Author: Alan Frindell <afrind@fb.com> Date: 2019-06-24 (Mon, 24 Jun 2019) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md Log Message: ----------- [qpack] Remove redundant stream text, update TOC Commit: bbb7d3d968a277d3d7825e7d50ecdb9cf6348368 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/bbb7d3d968a277d3d7825e7d50ecdb9cf6348368 Author: Alan Frindell <afrind@fb.com> Date: 2019-06-24 (Mon, 24 Jun 2019) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md Log Message: ----------- [qpack] Header blocks carry representations Commit: 8dfe13435f086a0c5197027e2f223c0f0122907f https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/8dfe13435f086a0c5197027e2f223c0f0122907f Author: Alan Frindell <afrind@fb.com> Date: 2019-06-24 (Mon, 24 Jun 2019) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md Log Message: ----------- Review feedback from everyone Compare: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/compare/add91327c5e3...8dfe13435f08