[quicwg/base-drafts] Editorial Fix for QUIC-Transport (#3902)

Jxck <notifications@github.com> Tue, 14 July 2020 07:56 UTC

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> An endpoint might send a CONNECTION_CLOSE frame in an Initial packet or in response to unauthenticated information received in Initial or Handshake packets. 

`A or in B in C or D` is hard to read.

1. [A | in B in C | D]
2. [A | in B in [C | D]]
3. [A | in B [in C | D]]
4. ...



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