[quicwg/base-drafts] ff1698: Fix grammar in 3.2. Receiving Stream States
Martin Thomson <noreply@github.com> Mon, 24 June 2019 02:18 UTC
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Branch: refs/heads/master Home: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts Commit: ff1698fc81ef401fed5c24c60bb7a51d1a3f6363 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/ff1698fc81ef401fed5c24c60bb7a51d1a3f6363 Author: Masaru Nomura <massa.nomura@gmail.com> Date: 2019-06-23 (Sun, 23 Jun 2019) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md Log Message: ----------- Fix grammar in 3.2. Receiving Stream States The phrase, `Before creating a stream, all streams of the same type with lower-numbered stream IDs MUST be created.`, is semantically equal to `Before all streams (of the same type with lower-numbered stream IDs) create a stream, all streams of the same type with lower-numbered stream IDs MUST be created.` This is not correct since all streams don't create a (new) stream. Moreover, by definition, a stream is created by sending data[1] or STREAM frames implicitly create a stream[2]. This indicates a stream itself doesn't create another stream. [1] https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-quic-transport-20#section-2 [2] https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-quic-transport-20#section-19.8 Commit: 4d38e6f55020714443ae5a7bddad662d1e3d7cc3 https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/4d38e6f55020714443ae5a7bddad662d1e3d7cc3 Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net> Date: 2019-06-23 (Sun, 23 Jun 2019) Changed paths: M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md Log Message: ----------- Merge pull request #2830 from monkey-mas/fix-grammar-in-3-2-ReceivingStreamStates Fix grammar in 3.2. Receiving Stream States Compare: https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/compare/98d4f38a6386...4d38e6f55020
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