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Mirja Kuehlewind <mirja.kuehlewind@ericsson.com> Wed, 01 June 2022 17:55 UTC

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From: Mirja Kuehlewind <mirja.kuehlewind@ericsson.com>
To: Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: Martin Duke's Yes on draft-ietf-quic-manageability-16: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Martin,

thanks for your review. We created PR for all your points!

Mirja


On 21.04.22, 18:57, "Martin Duke via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

    Martin Duke has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-quic-manageability-16: Yes

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    COMMENT:
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    2.1 Retry and VN packets “are not encrypted or protected in any way.” While
    this is made clear later in the document, it would be good to way that Retry
    packets are (forgibly) integrity-protected and that QUIC TPs later authenticate
    most of the contents of these packets.

    2.4 s/byes/bytes

    3.1.1 it’s worth noting that compatible version negotiation can cause the
    version to change mid-handshake. The true signal is a server-chosen version
    field echoed in a client packet.

    4.7 please update the QUIC-lb reference to draft-duke/ietf-quic-retry-offload.

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