Re: Roman Danyliw's Yes on draft-ietf-quic-transport-33: (with COMMENT)

Lucas Pardue <lucaspardue.24.7@gmail.com> Wed, 06 January 2021 04:30 UTC

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From: Lucas Pardue <lucaspardue.24.7@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 06 Jan 2021 04:30:09 +0000
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Subject: Re: Roman Danyliw's Yes on draft-ietf-quic-transport-33: (with COMMENT)
To: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>
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Hi Roman,

Thanks for the review. I've captured your comments as issues on the QUIC WG
GItHub repository. Links to each are provided as in-line responses.

On Tue, Jan 5, 2021 at 10:51 PM Roman Danyliw via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-quic-transport-33: Yes
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> Thank you to the WG and implementation community for this document.
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> ** Section 3.  Per “The state machines shown in this section are largely
> informative ”, why the qualifier of “largely”?
>

https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/issues/4564


> ** Section 8.1.  Per “Servers SHOULD ensure that tokens sent in Retry
> packets
> are only accepted for a short time”, is there any guidance on what a short
> time
> is here?
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https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/issues/4565


> ** Section 21.5.  Per “QUIC servers SHOULD NOT be deployed in networks that
> also have inadequately secured UDP endpoints”, I was wondering if this
> caution
> is a realistic.
>

https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/issues/4566

Cheers,
Lucas
On behalf of QUIC WG Chairs