Re: Working Group Last Call: QUIC Ops Drafts

Martin Thomson <> Tue, 16 February 2021 03:12 UTC

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Date: Tue, 16 Feb 2021 14:12:02 +1100
From: "Martin Thomson" <>
Subject: Re: Working Group Last Call: QUIC Ops Drafts
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I've read reviewed both of these drafts.

I think that the applicability draft is good.  It's clear and accurate.  Having followed the changes there, what comes out of WGLC should be in an acceptable state for requesting publication.

I would like to see another version of the manageability draft before approving it.

Most of the problems are "just" editorial, but there were numerous factual inaccuracies that directly relate to the suggestions being made.  I think that I caught most of those things that were obviously wrong with issues, but I might have missed a few things.

The biggest concern I have is with the way that the draft is not always clear about the conditions of statements it makes.  There are several critical distinctions that need to be kept very clear in writing something like this and this is excellent in some areas, but inconsistently applied.  The things that I think are important to keep clear always are:

1. The distinction between the properties of version 1 of QUIC and things that apply to all versions of QUIC.  I think that this could be achieved by stating up front that text only refers to version 1, but also repeating "version 1" to avoid ambiguity, even more than strictly necessary.  Explicitly calling out those few cases where invariant properties are being discussed (which is more often than might be obvious) seems sensible.

2. The distinction between actions taken unilaterally by path elements and actions taken by entities that cooperate with QUIC endpoints in performing their functions.  Here, most of the document is written from the perspective of not requiring cooperation.  That is stated up front[*], but the frequent digressions to talk about endpoint cooperation means that it is worth being extra clear, even to the point of redundancy.

[*] The draft says on-path observer in Section 3, but many of the actions in Section 4 involve intervention.

I don't have editorial pull requests, because I have to prioritize other work.  I think that this requires more work than I can commit to doing within the WGLC period.


On Fri, Feb 5, 2021, at 05:12, Matt Joras wrote:
> Hello,
> Now that the base drafts are cruising down the road to RFC the Chairs 
> and Editors believe it's time to proceed with the standardization of 
> the ops drafts. Therefore, this email announces a Working Group Last 
> Call (WGLC) for the following QUIC documents:
> * Manageability of the QUIC Transport Protocol
> * Applicability of the QUIC Transport Protocol
> The WGLC will run for two weeks, ending on 18 February 2021.
> Please review the documents above and open issues for your review 
> comments in our repository at You 
> may also send comments to
> Thanks,
> Lars, Lucas, Matt
> QUIC WG Chairs