nits: draft-ietf-radext-status-server
Bernard Aboba <bernard_aboba@hotmail.com> Mon, 19 April 2010 16:25 UTC
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Subject: nits: draft-ietf-radext-status-server
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> From: lars.eggert@nokia.com > Date: Mon, 19 Apr 2010 17:07:54 +0300 > To: draft-ietf-radext-status-server@tools.ietf.org; radext-chairs@tools.ietf.org; radext-ads@tools.ietf.org > Subject: nits: draft-ietf-radext-status-server > > Note: Most comments marked as "nits" below have been automatically > flagged by review scripts - there may be some false positives in there. > > > > Section 4.1., paragraph 9: > > to send Request packets. In that case, the Identifer field MUST be > > Nit: s/Identifer/Identifier/ > > > Section 4.2., paragraph 1: > > it is enabled. Servers SHOULD also permit adminstrators to enable or > > Nit: s/adminstrators/administrators/ > > > > Section 4.3., paragraph 4: > > accounting ports. The client MUST treat each destination (ip, port) > > Nit: s/(ip,/(IP,/ > > > Section 4.5., paragraph 4: > > Each RADIUS Proxyhas relationships with RADIUS Servers for both Realm > > Nit: s/Proxyhas/Proxy has/ > > > Section 0, paragraph 0: > > 0 0 0 70 EAP-MEssage > > Nit: s/EAP-MEssage/EAP-Message/ > >
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