Re: [radext] #195 (bigger-packets): minor nits

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#195: minor nits


Comment (by stefan.winter@restena.lu):

 Version -04 of the draft fixes most of these, with the exception of these
 three:

 6) In Security Considerations, a reference to RFC6613 is not in the
 standard xref [] notation.

 7) In the same section, an e is missing: "If these attacks ar
 accaptable..." (are)

 8) There should be a space in "Dial In" in Introduction, line 1.

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 Reporter:                           |       Owner:  draft-ietf-radext-
  stefan.winter@restena.lu           |  bigger-packets@tools.ietf.org
     Type:  defect                   |      Status:  new
 Priority:  minor                    |   Milestone:
Component:  bigger-packets           |     Version:
 Severity:  -                        |  Resolution:
 Keywords:                           |
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Ticket URL: <http://tools.ietf.org/wg/radext/trac/ticket/195#comment:3>
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