Re: [radext] #183 (dynamic-discovery): editorials

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#183: editorials

Changes (by stefan.winter@restena.lu):

 * status:  new => closed
 * resolution:   => fixed


Comment:

 I have fixed the draft in these respects. Things to note:

 * "timeout" and "time out" still both occur (only "time-out" has gone) -
 the former is used as a noun, whereas the latter is used as a verb as in
 constructions like "connections time out after a while". I believe this is
 correct use and have left this.

 * "a NAI" is also fixed for "a NAIRealm" - all now use "an"

 * TTL and RR expanded, but "DNS", "PKI", "TLSA" do not need to be expanded
 as per the RFC Style Guideline (https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc-style-
 guide/abbrev.expansion.txt) so I left them as-is

 All other bullets in this ticket were fixed verbatim in my working copy. I
 consider this ticket complete.

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 Reporter:  jouni.nospam@gmail.com        |       Owner:
     Type:  enhancement                   |  jouni.nospam@gmail.com
 Priority:  trivial                       |      Status:  closed
Component:  dynamic-discovery             |   Milestone:
 Severity:  Waiting for Shepherd Writeup  |     Version:
 Keywords:                                |  Resolution:  fixed
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