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Re: [Rats] Iotdir last call review of draft-ietf-rats-eat-13

Eliot Lear <lear@lear.ch> Sun, 05 June 2022 13:12 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Rats] Iotdir last call review of draft-ietf-rats-eat-13
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One correction:

I listed the following erroneously under the "Nits" section. It's not a 
nit, but a major issue.

Eliot

On 05.06.22 14:57, Eliot Lear via Datatracker wrote:
> Section 4.3.2
>
> If you are going to use the term "epoch" you have to describe when
> that epoch begins.  That has to be commonly understood between the
> parties.

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