[Rats] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on charter-ietf-rats-01-00: (with COMMENT)

Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 04 May 2022 09:37 UTC

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Subject: [Rats] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on charter-ietf-rats-01-00: (with COMMENT)

Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
charter-ietf-rats-01-00: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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I simply suggest to fix the contradictory statements/tenses:
- "The WG has defined an architecture (draft-ietf-rats-architecture)"
- "The main deliverables are ... Specify terminology and architecture"

Else continue the good work !

[Rats] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on charter-ietf… Éric Vyncke via Datatracker
Re: [Rats] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on charter-… Roman Danyliw
Re: [Rats] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on charter-… Smith, Ned