Re: [regext] [IANA #1231867] expert review for draft-ietf-regext-epp-eai (epp-extensions)

"Hollenbeck, Scott" <shollenbeck@verisign.com> Tue, 07 June 2022 13:03 UTC

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From: "Hollenbeck, Scott" <shollenbeck@verisign.com>
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> Dear Scott (cc: regext WG),
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> As the designated expert for the Extensions for the Extensible Provisioning
> Protocol (EPP) registry, can you review the proposed registration in draft-
> ietf-regext-epp-eai for us? Please see

[SAH] As noted by Tim Bray, There are a few minor issues:

The request to register the XML namespace looks fine. With respect to Tim's 
comment:

> Section 6.1 says
> “      XML:  None.  Namespace URIs do not represent an XML specification."
> and then
> "      XML:  See the "Formal Syntax" section of this document."
>
> Hmm, a namespace URI identifies an XML markup vocabulary, so "None" is a 
> little jarring. If there's no XML why the namespace? And it also feels 
> inconsistent with the second statement.

Sections 3.2 and 4 of RFC 3688 provides some context for the first "XML: None" 
above. There is no XML to be stored in the IANA registry, hence the "None".

There is no XML schema defined by this extension, so there is no need to 
register a schema. The " Registration request for the eai XML Schema" should 
be removed.

Scott