[regext] doc shepherd comments for draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-14

[James Galvin <[e-mail]>]

As document shepherd I have reviewed:

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-14

and provided a shepherd writeup so it can be submitted to the IESG for 
publication.

However, I note the following three editorial nits that the authors 
should correct before submission to the IESG.


1. The document has a normative reference to an internet-draft that has 
been recently published as an RFC:

	draft-ietf-regext-unhandled-namespaces -> RFC9038


2. In this paragraph, Section 1.1:

    XML is case sensitive. Unless stated otherwise, XML specifications
    moreover, examples provided in this document MUST be interpreted in
    the character case presented to develop a conforming implementation.

Change “specifications” to “specification”.  Drop 
“moreover,”.


3. In this paragraph, Section 1.1:

    In examples, "C:" represents lines sent by a protocol client and
    "S:" represents lines returned by a protocol server. Indentation and
    white space in examples are provided only to illustrate element
    relationships and are not a REQUIRED feature of this protocol.

Downcase the use of “REQUIRED”.


With those changes I would recommend to Antoin Verschuren as the 
responsible Chair for this document to submit the next version to the 
IESG for publication.

Jim