Re: [regext] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-02

[Barry Leiba <[e-mail]>]

Thanks for the review, Dan.

Your comment makes sense, yes.

Barry

On Thu, Feb 4, 2021 at 9:56 AM Dan Romascanu via Datatracker
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> Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
> Review result: Ready with Issues
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-02
> Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
> Review Date: 2021-02-04
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-08
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary:
>
> This Document is Ready with one issue that I would suggest to clarify and
> possibly apply edits before approval.
>
> Major issues:
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> If my understanding is correct this document together with 7483bis will replace
> RFC 7482 and RFC 7483 and advance them to Internet Standard. Sections 7 and 8
> will be taken out from the final published RFC. I believe that the relationship
> with RFC 7482 needs to be detailed either in the Introduction or in a dedicated
> version, in order to clarify for future readers and users the status of the 2 /
> 4 documents. I also believe that a shortened version of the 'Changes from RFC
> 7482' section now an Appendix should be included in the text of the document in
> its final form.
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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