[regext] Re: Mike Bishop's No Objection on draft-ietf-regext-rdap-ttl-extension-10: (with COMMENT)

[Gavin Brown <[e-mail]>]

Hi Mike, thanks for your review! The next version will fix these issues.

On Mon, 18 May 2026, at 19:22, Mike Bishop via Datatracker wrote:
> Mike Bishop has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-regext-rdap-ttl-extension-10: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> # IESG review of draft-ietf-regext-rdap-ttl-extension-10
>
> CC @MikeBishop
>
> ## Comments
>
> ### Section 1, paragraph 1
>
> A sentence expanding RDAP (Registration Data Access Protocol) and
> giving a brief definition/description would be helpful context.
>
> ### Section 3, paragraph 3
>
> This implies that all records of a given type have the same TTL across
> a given domain. Is that necessarily the case?
>
> ## Nits
>
> All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to
> address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by
> automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool) so there
> will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you
> did with these suggestions.
>
> ### Typos
>
> #### Section 8.1, paragraph 3
> ```
> -    2.  Made [RFC9499] a normative reference (thanks Ketan Talaulika)
> +    2.  Made [RFC9499] a normative reference (thanks Ketan Talaulikar)
> +                                                                    +
> ```
>
> #### Section 9, paragraph 2
> ```
> -    K.  Gurbani, Di Ma, Nabeel Cocker, Ketan Talaulika.
> +    K.  Gurbani, Di Ma, Nabeel Cocker, Ketan Talaulikar.
> +                                                      +
> ```
>
> ### Grammar/style
>
> #### Section 3, paragraph 3
> ```
> ection 8 of [RFC2181], a TTL value is a "an unsigned number, with a minimum v
>                                       ^
> ```
> Use "an" instead of "a" if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g.
> "an article", "an hour".
>
> You don't need an article both inside and outside the quotes.
>
> #### Section 3, paragraph 4
> ```
> 483647. That is, a maximum of 2^31 - 1.". TTL values are represented as JSON
>                                      ^^^^
> ```
> Unless punctuating an abbreviation or acronym, periods should not appear both
> inside and outside of a quote.
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