[regext] Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-ttl-extension-11.txt

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Hi Gavin, 

Thank you for implementing the changes.

-11 has these nits:

(1)

OLD:
   The Registration Data Access Protocol (RDAP, [STD95]) provides access
                                                         ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ 
   to provides access to information about Internet resources (domain^
   ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
   names, autonomous system numbers, and IP addresses).

NEW:
   The Registration Data Access Protocol (RDAP, [STD95]) provides access
   to information about Internet resources (domain
   names, autonomous system numbers, and IP addresses).

(2) 

RFC9083 and RFC7481 should be cited per the guidance at https://authors.ietf.org/en/reference-style-guidance. That is, "RFC 9083 [STD95]" and "RFC 7481 [STD95]", not [RFC9083] or RFC9083.

Up to you to fix these now or leave that to AUTH48.

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Gavin Brown <[e-mail]>
> Envoyé : jeudi 21 mai 2026 12:36
> À : [e-mail]
> Objet : [regext] Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-ttl-
> extension-11.txt
> 
> 
> This version incorporates all the IESG evaluation feedback
> received to date.
> 
> G.
> 
> On Thu, 21 May 2026, at 10:47, [e-mail] wrote:
> > Internet-Draft draft-ietf-regext-rdap-ttl-extension-11.txt is
> now available.
> > It is a work item of the Registration Protocols Extensions
> (REGEXT) WG
> > of the IETF.
> >
> >    Title:   RDAP Extension for DNS Time-To-Live (TTL Values)
> >    Author:  Gavin Brown
> >    Name:    draft-ietf-regext-rdap-ttl-extension-11.txt
> >    Pages:   12
> >    Dates:   2026-05-21
> >
> > Abstract:
> >
> >    This document specifies an extension to the Registration Data
> Access
> >    Protocol which allows the Time-To-Live (TTL) values for
> relevant DNS
> >    record types to be included in RDAP responses.
> >
> > About this draft
> >
> >    This note is to be removed before publishing as an RFC.
> >
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