Re: [regext] Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-17

"Joe Clarke (jclarke)" <jclarke@cisco.com> Thu, 07 October 2021 15:02 UTC

Return-Path: <jclarke@cisco.com>
X-Original-To: regext@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: regext@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id C2F7E3A0863; Thu, 7 Oct 2021 08:02:14 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -9.598
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-9.598 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_EF=-0.1, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_H2=-0.001, SPF_NONE=0.001, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001, USER_IN_DEF_DKIM_WL=-7.5] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no
Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (1024-bit key) header.d=cisco.com header.b=Xq9bRNVQ; dkim=pass (1024-bit key) header.d=cisco.onmicrosoft.com header.b=Ege7sEB+
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id LRt1dOTdoQNZ; Thu, 7 Oct 2021 08:02:09 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from rcdn-iport-1.cisco.com (rcdn-iport-1.cisco.com [173.37.86.72]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher DHE-RSA-SEED-SHA (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 7F0783A085F; Thu, 7 Oct 2021 08:02:09 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/simple; d=cisco.com; i=@cisco.com; l=6836; q=dns/txt; s=iport; t=1633618929; x=1634828529; h=from:to:cc:subject:date:message-id:references: mime-version; bh=xek+RF9R/i20IhlaI5r5Ub2uqXXDAhZiEw097WhHf/Q=; b=Xq9bRNVQzsT0o8R81/XBQ+U/MlGQ7Do1RIWM96w5Z09t/z2VKec00xuQ sQa0tQqauAoKH9QOM8ilGT8v9eJGtMDVSL1WQza7Pj0s55pHdHkF1JiZ2 c6xW90Z/g4i+1eJtwTZknvY5F4DE97HVHW61tt53bLj8XkN6U60hHkvM0 4=;
IronPort-PHdr: A9a23:39V5Ux+8B6VHj/9uWM3oyV9kXcBvk6nzNA8c8YEul65Kf77l9JPnbwTT5vRo2VnOW4iTq/dJkPHfvK2oX2scqY2Av3YPfN0pNVcFhMwakhZmDJuDDkv2f+LtZS0zB99LSENh8mv9Ok9QS47yYlTIqSi06jgfUhz0KQtyILHzHYjf6qb/1+2795DJJQtSgz/oarJpJxLwpgLU5aEr
IronPort-Data: A9a23:VuVD26j2xFWp/ltoFkT39msCX1619RIKZh0ujC45NGQN5FlHY01jehtvXDuAbq2PNzD3c4tyaovg8kJT7ZDdzNI3G1A9qS9hEixjpJueD7x1DKtf0wB+jyH7ockOA/w2MrEsF+hpCC+BzvuRGuK59yAljfnXHuGU5NPsY0ideyc1EE/Ntjo78wIJqtYAbemRW2thi/uryyHsEAfNNwpPD44hw/nrRCWDExjFkGhwUlQWPZintbJF/pUfJMp3yaqZdxMUTmTId9NWSdovzJnhlo/Y1w0mBtXgmbHhfwhVBLXTJgOJzHFRXsBOgDAb+Xd0ifl9ZaFaMBsM49mKt4gZJNFlt5e0QB0qM4XHmf8WVF9TFCQW0ahuqeSbeCjh4JDDp6HBWz62qxl0N2ksMIIV6vpfAGxS+7ofMj9lRhyZjuyqhbO2VucpnMksIdn3eY4HojR6wD7YFuo8UNXGSqTM+dJe1TE7i4ZHGfL2ZscFZ3xodhuoSxlGIUtSA5s6mM+pi2XxNTpCpzq9orIspmTS1iRw3aTjdt3PdbSiQMxUmm6EoWjH9n/iCw0GMNGFjzGC9xqRakXn9c/gcJgZGLv9/flwjRjMgGcSExYRE1C8pJGEZoeFc4o3AyQpFuAG9PhpnKBzcuTAYg==
IronPort-HdrOrdr: A9a23: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
X-IronPort-Anti-Spam-Filtered: true
X-IronPort-Anti-Spam-Result: A0B9AACnCl9h/49dJa1aHQEBAQEJARIBBQUBQIFFCAELAYFQKSgHd1o3MYgOA4RZYIgJlWmFBoEuFIERA1QLAQEBDQEBKgEOCAQBAYQ5RQKCSAIlNAkOAQIEAQEBEgEBBQEBAQIBBgSBEROFaA2GQwIBAwEBEC4BASwLAQ8CAQgOMQcnCxQRAgQOBQgaggRMgX5XAy8BDkKgUwGBOgKKH3iBM4EBgggBAQYEBIUKGII1AwaBOgGDAIQThnUnHIFJRIFYgmc+gmMBAYFGHCtOglSCLos5agRDEFskWwUFL5IijEyeXIEaCoMwikaOQIYBFINqi2yXQKJymHgCBAIEBQIOAQEGgTAxO4FZcBU7gmlRGQ+OIDeDO4UUhUp0OAIGCwEBAwmUcQEB
X-IronPort-AV: E=Sophos;i="5.85,355,1624320000"; d="scan'208,217";a="934186948"
Received: from rcdn-core-7.cisco.com ([173.37.93.143]) by rcdn-iport-1.cisco.com with ESMTP/TLS/DHE-RSA-SEED-SHA; 07 Oct 2021 15:01:33 +0000
Received: from mail.cisco.com (xbe-aln-006.cisco.com [173.36.7.21]) by rcdn-core-7.cisco.com (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTPS id 197F1X60005176 (version=TLSv1.2 cipher=AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=OK); Thu, 7 Oct 2021 15:01:33 GMT
Received: from xfe-rcd-005.cisco.com (173.37.227.253) by xbe-aln-006.cisco.com (173.36.7.21) with Microsoft SMTP Server (version=TLS1_2, cipher=TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384) id 15.2.792.15; Thu, 7 Oct 2021 10:01:33 -0500
Received: from xfe-rtp-003.cisco.com (64.101.210.233) by xfe-rcd-005.cisco.com (173.37.227.253) with Microsoft SMTP Server (version=TLS1_2, cipher=TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384) id 15.2.792.15; Thu, 7 Oct 2021 10:01:33 -0500
Received: from NAM12-BN8-obe.outbound.protection.outlook.com (64.101.32.56) by xfe-rtp-003.cisco.com (64.101.210.233) with Microsoft SMTP Server (version=TLS1_2, cipher=TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384) id 15.2.792.15 via Frontend Transport; Thu, 7 Oct 2021 11:01:32 -0400
ARC-Seal: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; s=arcselector9901; d=microsoft.com; cv=none; b=bWmIVezbhSBQAidvmR/L2zDajK58HZ41G+usNuZfcYSX6hinFuJYo9kJhcvPM2f0bhnhRpkApAbv2KrTHunJWMWUNf57RjRXRZrj1o3PElsmJL0YDAx+JlF96ZMBDzSFfRdeRnZ27ONmY4puOZbkqyRR+P8aaGs8QEG/2wSOzd/rnKF55IMhmlDRYe1GyiZ8D3lu6AQ/zM3MQmOAuLAXjyUNbJ5BDz+jgNAzaF9CEKo+lFXISasrACuXQDe0WFSZGyesXoi3+VwMCu9CJdYY/phLckr5upW+KXjh5xmsHmhDZVlMMsySIo2KRMzzOjdsfEhs4+xJnRDxPXKVTdYW1w==
ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=microsoft.com; s=arcselector9901; h=From:Date:Subject:Message-ID:Content-Type:MIME-Version:X-MS-Exchange-AntiSpam-MessageData-ChunkCount:X-MS-Exchange-AntiSpam-MessageData-0:X-MS-Exchange-AntiSpam-MessageData-1; bh=4qdU/2xzVEggsemrrVSmRIAZfFNszWsLSA4XV39+bok=; b=f2jgx/+ipeQqQap/zeZqtpV2AxlDveJRaXjszStSMXewOpthWkRvnyN/2ZXgWGMAwzLcfU5zL77/wRQPx2EqPobfbfm+GBlYn9yUc5UyoFbE9gFRYgbhuso0ilTvCpbROwb1VW5fp7OzLYIKaNQDCwr10U2oWoCc5OsQlVwQbXhHSnva7HwbyIzuhdP1qa2vOK7aBEyOcGwBt+gfimEaONZ2B4OLENMfGX3D6l2fWkTU36XvFxjrfHYS8u8nV7MfoA6qCY/yjxi5ZVPIXVUaVyJbUAPyUIwatriAv9vMZjhNJZB60N2jxvAbn3KCwZ40XxgFLBT4qYjaMRwcxqBWqA==
ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; mx.microsoft.com 1; spf=pass smtp.mailfrom=cisco.com; dmarc=pass action=none header.from=cisco.com; dkim=pass header.d=cisco.com; arc=none
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=cisco.onmicrosoft.com; s=selector2-cisco-onmicrosoft-com; h=From:Date:Subject:Message-ID:Content-Type:MIME-Version:X-MS-Exchange-SenderADCheck; bh=4qdU/2xzVEggsemrrVSmRIAZfFNszWsLSA4XV39+bok=; b=Ege7sEB+Ei87V6zTxO2whrJK3uaBASQmGHIPY2dDJKSFZqGoOKspdjKPoHQ2ZbUYdEFrt7X/yQhdoUxgKTI6tofGmjcyB/J+wXtqo9lfRU99sTgCE8HH1YB4KFLW1qgzZG6TFrut8Z1ThuTv090Rd0NlpaoObsQWnfAUOI4TTho=
Received: from BN9PR11MB5371.namprd11.prod.outlook.com (2603:10b6:408:11c::11) by BN6PR11MB1571.namprd11.prod.outlook.com (2603:10b6:405:d::22) with Microsoft SMTP Server (version=TLS1_2, cipher=TLS_ECDHE_RSA_WITH_AES_256_GCM_SHA384) id 15.20.4587.19; Thu, 7 Oct 2021 15:01:32 +0000
Received: from BN9PR11MB5371.namprd11.prod.outlook.com ([fe80::a1ca:8208:b02b:4c3f]) by BN9PR11MB5371.namprd11.prod.outlook.com ([fe80::a1ca:8208:b02b:4c3f%6]) with mapi id 15.20.4587.020; Thu, 7 Oct 2021 15:01:31 +0000
From: "Joe Clarke (jclarke)" <jclarke@cisco.com>
To: Tobias Sattler <mail@tobiassattler.com>
CC: "ops-dir@ietf.org" <ops-dir@ietf.org>, "last-call@ietf.org" <last-call@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance.all@ietf.org>, "regext@ietf.org" <regext@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: [regext] Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-17
Thread-Index: AQHXuvHq/m8Ev5zsZUW41TzOhrwyQw==
Date: Thu, 07 Oct 2021 15:01:31 +0000
Message-ID: <BN9PR11MB53710AD39395762205754458B8B19@BN9PR11MB5371.namprd11.prod.outlook.com>
References: <163354856438.11198.16545686382778306553@ietfa.amsl.com> <D3E3784D-2E53-4C55-8657-E2BBA8C4CE80@tobiassattler.com>
Accept-Language: en-US
Content-Language: en-US
X-MS-Has-Attach:
X-MS-TNEF-Correlator:
authentication-results: tobiassattler.com; dkim=none (message not signed) header.d=none;tobiassattler.com; dmarc=none action=none header.from=cisco.com;
x-ms-publictraffictype: Email
x-ms-office365-filtering-correlation-id: ca3a69cf-fc65-4a09-0ad8-08d989a35943
x-ms-traffictypediagnostic: BN6PR11MB1571:
x-microsoft-antispam-prvs: <BN6PR11MB15715502CFD0B0CB0EF9AE04B8B19@BN6PR11MB1571.namprd11.prod.outlook.com>
x-ms-oob-tlc-oobclassifiers: OLM:8273;
x-ms-exchange-senderadcheck: 1
x-ms-exchange-antispam-relay: 0
x-microsoft-antispam: BCL:0;
x-microsoft-antispam-message-info: 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
x-forefront-antispam-report: CIP:255.255.255.255; CTRY:; LANG:en; SCL:1; SRV:; IPV:NLI; SFV:NSPM; H:BN9PR11MB5371.namprd11.prod.outlook.com; PTR:; CAT:NONE; SFS:(366004)(166002)(966005)(8676002)(71200400001)(83380400001)(55016002)(122000001)(53546011)(9686003)(4326008)(6916009)(38070700005)(6506007)(52536014)(26005)(316002)(508600001)(7696005)(33656002)(5660300002)(91956017)(66476007)(66556008)(2906002)(64756008)(66446008)(76116006)(66946007)(54906003)(86362001)(8936002)(186003)(38100700002); DIR:OUT; SFP:1101;
x-ms-exchange-antispam-messagedata-chunkcount: 1
x-ms-exchange-antispam-messagedata-0: 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
x-ms-exchange-transport-forked: True
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="_000_BN9PR11MB53710AD39395762205754458B8B19BN9PR11MB5371namp_"
MIME-Version: 1.0
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-AuthAs: Internal
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-AuthSource: BN9PR11MB5371.namprd11.prod.outlook.com
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-Network-Message-Id: ca3a69cf-fc65-4a09-0ad8-08d989a35943
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-originalarrivaltime: 07 Oct 2021 15:01:31.8074 (UTC)
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-fromentityheader: Hosted
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-id: 5ae1af62-9505-4097-a69a-c1553ef7840e
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-mailboxtype: HOSTED
X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-userprincipalname: hL8ysIDIFchJnuHCg2tP7Lad1nvf0p/uisU3pvury6dZg5qZx6nQPoD3eKlNHBvtsKd0+glBuQ9GQ2MeKzk8xw==
X-MS-Exchange-Transport-CrossTenantHeadersStamped: BN6PR11MB1571
X-OriginatorOrg: cisco.com
X-Outbound-SMTP-Client: 173.36.7.21, xbe-aln-006.cisco.com
X-Outbound-Node: rcdn-core-7.cisco.com
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/regext/i29H5IWeowPYVA2WB91j7KMkk38>
Subject: Re: [regext] Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-17
X-BeenThere: regext@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29
Precedence: list
List-Id: Registration Protocols Extensions <regext.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/regext>, <mailto:regext-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/regext/>
List-Post: <mailto:regext@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:regext-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext>, <mailto:regext-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 07 Oct 2021 15:02:15 -0000

Thanks, Tobias.  I went through the new text, and it addresses my comments.

Joe

On 10/6/21 16:37, Tobias Sattler wrote:
Hi Joe,

Thank you for your review and comments.

We have added our replies inline below and updated v18 on GitHub (https://github.com/seitsu/registry-epp-maintenance/blob/master/draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance.txt) accordingly.

Please let us know if you have any questions.

Best,
Tobias

On 6. Oct 2021, at 21:29, Joe Clarke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org<mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> wrote:

Reviewer: Joe Clarke
Review result: Has Nits

I have been tasked to review this document on behalf of the OPS Area
Directorate.  This document describes an EPP extension for conveying
maintenance events to EPP clients.  Overall, I find the document mostly ready,
but I do have a few questions, and I found a few typos.

===

Section 3.3

What is the use case for having <maint:start> be equal to <maint:end>?  I would
think you'd always want the end time to be in the future to be a relevant
maintenance event.

TS: Good point. Fixed, we removed the part “be equal to".


===

Section 3.3

s/negotiated value is something other then the/negotiated value is something
other than the/


TS: Fixed.

===

Section 3.3

If one of the intervention elements is true, how does one find out the details
of the connection or implementation-related intervention?  I imagine the URI
would provide that, but I was expecting to see it stated in this document in
the description of these elements.

TS: Fixed, we added a reference to <maint:detail> in the description.


===

Section 4.1.4

s/command and response is defined/command and response are defined/

TS: Fixed.



_______________________________________________
regext mailing list
regext@ietf.org<mailto:regext@ietf.org>
https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext