[regext] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-regext-dnrd-objects-mapping-09: (with COMMENT)

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Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-regext-dnrd-objects-mapping-09: No Objection

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Thank you for this document and the various XLS/CSV examples related to
particular elements of the data model.

** Section 4.4.  Per the use of SHA-256 as a checksum algorithm, what
identifier should be used in the cksumAlg attribute?

** Section 4.4.  I concur with the OPSDIR reviewer (Joe Clarke), it would seem
like native support (in the format itself) for a more robust checksum algorithm
would be desirable.

** Section 4.6.2.1.  Per “The <rdeCsv:file> child element defines a reference
to the CSV file name”, is any file path information permitted, or are do all
referenced files in dump need to be unique?

** Section 5.8.1.  Please add a normative reference to XPath

** Section 7.  If one had a business model requiring that checksums  be
computed using SHA-384 (set @cksumAlg) or using 7z compression (set
@compression), how would one specify that in the profile per the defined steps
in this section – nothing needs to be extended (step 1, step 3) or <policy>
doesn’t seem to support specifying a particular attribute (step 2), so would
one hard-code that into a custom schema (step 4)?

** Editorial Nits
- Section 9.1  Typo. s/Seperated/Separated/

- Section 11.  Typos.  A few repeated instances.  s/section Section/Section/g