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Re: [regext] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-regext-rdap-object-tag-03

"Hollenbeck, Scott" <shollenbeck@verisign.com> Sun, 15 July 2018 19:48 UTC

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From: "Hollenbeck, Scott" <shollenbeck@verisign.com>
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Tim Chown <tim.chown@jisc.ac.uk>
> Sent: Sunday, July 15, 2018 12:15 PM
> To: ops-dir@ietf.org
> Cc: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-object-tag.all@ietf.org; regext@ietf.org
> Subject: [EXTERNAL] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-regext-rdap-
> object-tag-03
>
> Reviewer: Tim Chown
> Review result: Ready
>
> Hi,
>
> I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
> These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational
> aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call
> may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors
> and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call
> comments.
>
> This draft extends RFC 7484 to describe an operational (best) practice to
> allow Registration Data Access Protocol (RDAP) identifiers to be
> structured such that they can convey the authoritative server to use for
> additional RDAP queries.
>
> The concept of the draft is described well including examples. Two early
> stage implementations (Verisign Labs and OpenRDAP) are listed in the
> document.
>
> The draft is Ready for publication.
>
> One minor nit - the RFC 2119 text should probably be in its own section
> rather than within the introduction.

Thanks for the review, Tim. I used RFC 8174 to guide placement of that text. This is the guidance it provides:

"Authors who follow these guidelines should incorporate this phrase near the beginning of their document"

So I just put it at the end of the introduction instead of creating an additional single-paragraph section.

Scott

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