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Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im> Fri, 04 March 2022 03:10 UTC
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Subject: [Rfced-future] redundant text
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While addressing Program feedback just now in my working copy, I noticed
that there's a great deal of overlap between Section 1 ("Introduction")
and Section 2 ("Overview of the Model"). I plan to clean this up in -12
and (in line with feedback from Martin Dürst) to move some of the more
historical text to Section 8 ("Changes from Version 2 of the RFC Editor
Model"). I think this will make the document read much more smoothly.
Peter
- [Rfced-future] redundant text Peter Saint-Andre