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Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im> Sun, 06 March 2022 20:27 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Rfced-future] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-carpenter-rfced-iab-charter-06.txt
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Looks good. My apologies for noticing a few more nits (the rationale is 
that it's better to specify version 3 of the RFC Editor Model, not "the 
new model" because it won't be new forever)...

OLD

    This document updates the IAB Charter (RFC 2850) to be consistent
    with the new model for the RFC Editor (draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-
    model).

NEW

    This document updates the IAB Charter (RFC 2850) to be consistent
    with version 3 of the RFC Editor Model (draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-
    model).

OLD

    In the RFC Editor model defined by [I-D.iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model], the
    RFC Series is now governed by its own mechanisms.

NEW

    In version 3 of the RFC Editor model defined by 
[I-D.iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model], the
    RFC Series is governed by its own mechanisms.

On 3/6/22 1:22 PM, Brian E Carpenter wrote:
> This version just fixes nits detected in Last Call reviews.
> 
> -------- Forwarded Message --------
> Subject: I-D Action: draft-carpenter-rfced-iab-charter-06.txt
> Date: Sun, 06 Mar 2022 12:05:10 -0800
> From: internet-drafts@ietf.org
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> To: i-d-announce@ietf.org
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
> directories.
> 
> 
>          Title           : IAB Charter Update for RFC Editor Model
>          Author          : Brian E. Carpenter
>      Filename        : draft-carpenter-rfced-iab-charter-06.txt
>      Pages           : 4
>      Date            : 2022-03-06
> 
> Abstract:
>     This document updates the IAB Charter (RFC 2850) to be consistent
>     with the new model for the RFC Editor (draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-
>     model).
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-carpenter-rfced-iab-charter/
> 
> There is also an HTML version available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-carpenter-rfced-iab-charter-06.html
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-carpenter-rfced-iab-charter-06
> 
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