Re: [Rfced-future] New Version Notification for draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-11.txt

[Eliot Lear <[e-mail]>]

Thanks for the read through and those points.  The chairs are capturing 
all proposed changes.

Eliot

On 13.02.22 15:22, Colin Perkins wrote:
> On re-reading this draft, I noticed the following two points:
>
> §3.1.1.4: "The intent is that the RSWG shall operate in a way similar to working groups in the IETF and research groups in the IRTF."
>
> §3.2.2: "the RSWG may adopt the proposal as a draft proposal of the RSWG, in much the same way a working group of the IETF or research group of the IRTF would"
>
> There are some significant differences in the way IRTF and IETF groups are permitted to operate. To avoid confusion, these sections might be better phrased by omitting the references to IRTF.
>
> Apologies that I didn’t catch these earlier.
>
> Colin
>
>
>
>
>> On 1 Feb 2022, at 14:47, Peter Saint-Andre <[e-mail]> wrote:
>>
>> FYI.
>>
>>
>> -------- Forwarded Message --------
>> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-11.txt
>> Date: Tue, 01 Feb 2022 06:45:46 -0800
>> From: [e-mail]
>> To: Peter Saint-Andre <[e-mail]>
>>
>>
>> A new version of I-D, draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-11.txt
>> has been successfully submitted by Peter Saint-Andre and posted to the
>> IETF repository.
>>
>> Name:		draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model
>> Revision:	11
>> Title:		RFC Editor Model (Version 3)
>> Document date:	2022-02-01
>> Group:		iab
>> Pages:		32
>> URL: https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-11.txt
>> Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model/
>> Htmlized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model
>> Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-11
>>
>> Abstract:
>>    This document specifies version 3 of the RFC Editor Model.  The model
>>    defines two high-level tasks related to the RFC Series.  First,
>>    policy definition is the joint responsibility of the RFC Series
>>    Working Group (RSWG), which produces policy proposals, and the RFC
>>    Series Approval Board (RSAB), which approves such proposals.  Second,
>>    policy implementation is primarily the responsibility of the RFC
>>    Production Center (RPC) as contractually overseen by the IETF
>>    Administration Limited Liability Company (IETF LLC).
>>
>>    This document obsoletes RFC 8728.  This document updates RFC 7841,
>>    RFC 8729, and RFC 8730.
>>
>>
>>
>> The IETF Secretariat
>>
>>
>> -- 
>> Rfced-future mailing list
>> [e-mail]
>> https://www.iab.org/mailman/listinfo/rfced-future
>
>