Re: [Rift] Fw: I-D Action: draft-ietf-rift-yang-04.txt

Hi Michal, 
Much appreciate for your review! 
05 version of this draft has just been submitted. 
Thank you very much!
Best regards,
Sandy

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主 题 ：Re: Fw:[Rift] I-D Action:  draft-ietf-rift-yang-04.txt
Hi Sandy,
seems fine to me now without having any understanding of RIFT. Just a few nits:
- typedef level has explicitly mentioned maximum value both in definition and description - redundant in description but causes no harm
- grouping address description - both IPv4 and IPv6 are allowed which I would mention (if intentional)
s/"IPv4 or IPv6 address to be used."/"IPv4 and\/or IPv6 address to be used."
- missing space after a grouping name
s/grouping lie-elements{/grouping lie-elements {
Regards,
Michal
On Monday, October 18, 2021 08:25 CEST, <zhang.zheng@zte.com.cn> wrote:
> Hi Michal,
> The new version of RIFT YANG draft has been submitted.
> We hope that all your comments has been addressed.
> Please review the update. Thank you very much!
> Best regards,
> Sandy
>
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Routing In Fat Trees WG of the IETF.
> Title           : A YANG Data Model for Routing in Fat Trees (RIFT)
> Authors         : Zheng Zhang
> Yuehua Wei
> Shaowen Ma
> Xufeng Liu
> Bruno Rijsman
> Filename        : draft-ietf-rift-yang-04.txt
> Pages           : 41
> Date            : 2021-10-17
> Abstract:
> This document defines a YANG data model for the configuration and
> management of Routing in Fat Trees (RIFT) Protocol.
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rift-yang/
> There is also an htmlized version available at:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-rift-yang-04
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-rift-yang-04
> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
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