[rohc] SigComp documents reviewed

"Mats Nordberg (EPL)" <Mats.Nordberg@epl.ericsson.se> Wed, 15 May 2002 10:55 UTC

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From: "Mats Nordberg (EPL)" <Mats.Nordberg@epl.ericsson.se>
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Hi,

I have reviewed the SigComp documents
  draft-ietf-rohc-signaling-req-assump-05.txt
  draft-ietf-rohc-sigcomp-06.txt
  draft-ietf-rohc-sigcomp-extended-03.txt
and found no technical issues.

The following editorial issues was found in draft-ietf-rohc-sigcomp-06.txt:
MATS-1:
"manual decompression failure" should be described in the Terminology section to increase readability.

MATS-2:
Page 20, paragraph 4, spelling error, change "compartmennt" to "compartment".

Mats-3:
Page 25, last paragraph, wording, please remove "unlimited". The UDVM is very flexible but for sure not that flexible.

Mats-4:
Page 27, 8.1 last paragraph , spelling error, change "addressible" to "addressable".

Best Regards,
Mats Nordberg

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