[Roll] [roll] #134: draft-ietf-roll-trickle-mcast-05 - Minor editorial comments
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#134: draft-ietf-roll-trickle-mcast-05 - Minor editorial comments From From: Kerry Lynn <kerlyn at ieee.org> On Fri, 13 Sep 2013 08:10:03 -0400 Source: http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/roll/current/msg08155.html Editorial: - In section 4.3, on Proactive Forwarding, the phrase "MPL Data Message message" is redundant and should be "MPL Data Message". - In the last paragraph of section 4.3 the phrase "a new MPL Data messages" should be "a new MPL Data Message". - [I-D.droms-6man-multicast-scopes] should be moved from section 14.1 to 14.2. -- ---------------------------------------+------------------------------ Reporter: mariainesrobles@gmail.com | Owner: jonhui@cisco.com Type: defect | Status: new Priority: minor | Milestone: Component: trickle-mcast | Version: Severity: In WG Last Call | Keywords: ---------------------------------------+------------------------------ Ticket URL: <http://tools.ietf.org/wg/roll/trac/ticket/134> roll <http://tools.ietf.org/wg/roll/>
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