[Roll] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-unaware-leaves-26: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 16 December 2020 22:27 UTC

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Subject: [Roll] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-roll-unaware-leaves-26: (with COMMENT)
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Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-roll-unaware-leaves-26: No Objection

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(I reviewed -25, only skimmed the diff from -25 to -26)

[[ comments ]]

[ section 5.4 ]

* Another way to address non-zero segments left RH3s in
  useofrplinfo might be to add some text here saying they MUST
  be dropped and MAY send ICMPv6 error messages, and then
  point to this text.  Or just say that there's no change to
  the processing of these from existing documents. Or something.


[[ nits ]]

[ section 9.1 ]

* "to maintain the NCE ... alive" -> "to keep the NCE ... alive",
  I think

[ section 9.2 ]

* "ad serving" -> "and serving", probably

[ section 9.2.1 ]

* "signaled a 6CIO" -> "signaled by a 6CIO"

[ section 10 ]

* ". ." -> "."