Re: [Roll] [roll] #115: draft-ietf-roll-security-threats-01.txt --- Editorial Comments

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Subject: Re: [Roll] [roll] #115: draft-ietf-roll-security-threats-01.txt --- Editorial Comments
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#115: draft-ietf-roll-security-threats-01.txt --- Editorial Comments


Comment (by mcr@sandelman.ca):

 Replying to [ticket:115 mariainesrobles@…]:
 > === Section 4.1 [[BR]]
 > * 4.1- the authors should use technical terminology from 4949, since
 they went to the trouble to cite in various places, e.g., replace
 “sniffing” with “passive wiretapping,” both here and throughput the
 document.--by SK
 >

 Done.

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 Reporter:  mariainesrobles@gmail.com  |       Owner:  mcr@sandelman.ca
     Type:  defect                     |      Status:  assigned
 Priority:  minor                      |   Milestone:
Component:  security-threats           |     Version:
 Severity:  Active WG Document         |  Resolution:
 Keywords:  Editorial                  |
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