Re: [Roll] re-organizing use-of-rplinfo document: worth the typing?

Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Sun, 11 June 2017 18:16 UTC

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Comments: In-reply-to peter van der Stok <stokcons@xs4all.nl> message dated "Thu, 11 May 2017 09:52:14 +0200."
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Subject: Re: [Roll] re-organizing use-of-rplinfo document: worth the typing?
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peter van der Stok <stokcons@xs4all.nl> wrote:
    > I got the clear impression that the draft needs thorough re-writing
    > anyway.  That being the case and noticing that reviewers have problems
    > to get to the end of the document, I wanted to suggest the following
    > re-ordering.  One use-case which describes the longest trajectory from
    > outside, to inside, and outside the RPL LAN, decomposed in parts, say,
    > a,b,c,d All the other use cases just tables with their composition of
    > parts in the wanted order.

Ines and I are working on revisions: this includes changing the RPI code!

I would like to know from the WG if this decomposition would satisfy?


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