Re: [Roll] [roll] #119: draft-ietf-roll-security-threats-01.txt --- Verify abstraction/superficial terms

"roll issue tracker" <trac+roll@trac.tools.ietf.org> Mon, 21 October 2013 03:37 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Roll] [roll] #119: draft-ietf-roll-security-threats-01.txt --- Verify abstraction/superficial terms
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#119: draft-ietf-roll-security-threats-01.txt --- Verify abstraction/superficial
terms


Comment (by mcr@sandelman.ca):

 Replying to [ticket:119 mariainesrobles@…]:
 > === Section 3.1[[BR]]
 > * Verify abstraction/superficial terms
 >
 > === Section 5.2.1[[BR]]
 > * 5.2.1 – the discussion  here is very superficial, not as thorough as
 the subsections in 5.1.
 >
 > === Section 5.2.2[[BR]]
 > * 5.2.2 – This discussion is very superficial as well.
 >
 > === Section 5.2.3[[BR]]
 > * 5.2.3 –The discussion of the  use of public key technology vs.
 symmetric cryptographic mechanisms for authentication is vastly
 oversimplified, and thus not very useful.

 much rewriting of these sections done.

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 Reporter:  mariainesrobles@gmail.com  |       Owner:  mcr@sandelman.ca
     Type:  defect                     |      Status:  assigned
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Component:  security-threats           |     Version:
 Severity:  Active WG Document         |  Resolution:
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