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Re: [Roll] Publication has been requested for draft-ietf-roll-dao-projection-31

Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com> Wed, 04 January 2023 19:01 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Roll] Publication has been requested for draft-ietf-roll-dao-projection-31
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Hi!

I had a very quick look at this document.  It needs additional reviews.


(1) §4 uses "amends" as an indication of a formal Update (along the lines
of draft-kuehlewind-rswg-updates-tag).  Because what we have today is only
the Updates tag, please indicate in the header and the text any Updated
RFCs.

(1a) One of them seems to be rfc6553, so we'll need to get 6man to review
that.


(2) §3.7.2 (Positioning vs. Related IETF Standards) mentions specific
expectations related to the work of other WGs:

    3.7.2.1.  Extending 6TiSCH
    3.7.2.2.  Mapping to DetNet
    3.7.2.3.  Leveraging PCE
    3.7.2.4.  Providing for RAW

I couldn't find a (formal) request for these WGs to review the document.
Did I miss it?  If not, then please request it.  I know that there is
significant participation overlap -- that is not enough.


(3) Per the request in October [1], I need you to also request a rtg-dir
review.


While I'm hoping that none of these reviews result in significant changes,
I'm returning the document to the WG.

Suggestion:  Once the draft has been revised with the Updates information,
issue a new WGLC and cc all the relevant WGs on it.


Thanks!

Alvaro.


[1] Sent to rtg-chairs (which is not a proper mailing-list), search for
"Message-ID: <
AM7PR03MB6451605AB56AFC67424797A3EE229@AM7PR03MB6451.eurprd03.prod.outlook.com
>".

On January 4, 2023 at 11:48:16 AM, Ines Robles via Datatracker (
noreply@ietf.org) wrote:

Ines Robles has requested publication of draft-ietf-roll-dao-projection-31
as Proposed Standard on behalf of the ROLL working group.

Please verify the document's state at
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-roll-dao-projection/

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