[rtcweb] Warren Kumari's No Objection on draft-ietf-rtcweb-overview-18: (with COMMENT)

[Warren Kumari <[e-mail]>]

Warren Kumari has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-rtcweb-overview-18: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thank you -- I like these sort of overview documents for complex things
like WebRTC - they provide a newcomer to the technology a good place to
start, and help describe some of the reasons why things look the way they
do.

I do have a few comments on the document itself - there are all minor /
bikeshedding and can be ignored if you choose:
1: "Development of The Universal Solution has proved hard, however, for
all the usual reasons."
 -- this is cute, but leaves people wondering what "all the usual reasons
are". Perhaps just "Development of The Universal Solution has, however, 
proved hard." (or just cut after the "however in the original").

2: I'm not sure why you have "Protocol" in the terminology section. It
doesn't seem like it is useful for the document, and this document
doesn't seem like the right place to (re) define it.

3: Acknowledgements: 
Funny spacing in "Olle E.     Johansson"