Re: [rtcweb] I-D Action: draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-02.txt

Barry Dingle <btdingle@gmail.com> Mon, 10 February 2014 10:08 UTC

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From: Barry Dingle <btdingle@gmail.com>
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Protocol looks good.

One small point - the title of this protocol is "WebRTC Data Channel
Protocol" but the Abstract says "*This document specifies a simple protocol
for establishing symmetric data channels between the peers.*"  This could
cause confusion between what is a Data Channel Protocol and what is an
Establishing protocol.

It appears that the title of this protocol should be "WebRTC Data
Channel *Establishment
*Protocol" in order to avoid future confusion as to its purpose.

/Barry Dingle
Australia


On Mon, Feb 10, 2014 at 8:16 AM, <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
>  This draft is a work item of the Real-Time Communication in WEB-browsers
> Working Group of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : WebRTC Data Channel Protocol
>         Authors         : Randell Jesup
>                           Salvatore Loreto
>                           Michael Tuexen
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-02.txt
>         Pages           : 12
>         Date            : 2014-02-09
>
> Abstract:
>    The Web Real-Time Communication (WebRTC) working group is charged to
>    provide protocols to support for direct interactive rich
>    communication using audio, video, and data between two peers' web-
>    browsers.  This document specifies a simple protocol for establishing
>    symmetric data channels between the peers.  It uses a two way
>    handshake and allows sending of user data without waiting for the
>    handshake to complete.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol/
>
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-02
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-rtcweb-data-protocol-02
>
>
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
> submission
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