Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-active-tail-09

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Tue, 03 July 2018 17:32 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-active-tail-09
From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Date: Tue, 03 Jul 2018 13:32:06 -0400
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Linda, thanks for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Jun 28, 2018, at 3:30 PM, Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@huawei.com> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-active-tail-??
> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review Date: 2018-06-28
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-06-18
> IESG Telechat date: 2018-07-05
> 
> Summary: clear writing of the procedure.
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
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> Are End points that not responding considered "Inactive Tails"?  Does the
> HeadEnd report the "Inactive Tails"?
> 
> Linda Dunbar
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