Warren Kumari's No Objection on draft-ietf-bfd-yang-16: (with COMMENT)

Warren Kumari <warren@kumari.net> Wed, 04 July 2018 18:17 UTC

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Subject: Warren Kumari's No Objection on draft-ietf-bfd-yang-16: (with COMMENT)
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Warren Kumari has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-bfd-yang-16: No Objection

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Thank you.

I also had a few minor nits:
Nits:
Section 1:
"The YANG modules in this document conform to the Network Management Datastore
Architecture (NMDA) Network Management Datastore Architecture [RFC8342]. " The
Department of Redundancy Department called and wants some of their words back
please :-)

Section 2:
"Since BFD is used for liveliness detection of various forwarding
   paths, there is no uniform key to identify a BFD session.  So the BFD
   data model is split in multiple YANG modules where each module
   corresponds to one type of forwarding path."
I think this would be more readable as:
"... to identify a BFD session, and so the BFD..."  (hey, I said it was a nit)

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