[RTG-DIR] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-trill-resilient-trees-08
Min Ye <amy.yemin@huawei.com> Mon, 15 January 2018 02:43 UTC
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Subject: [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-trill-resilient-trees-08
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Reviewer: Loa Andersson Review result: Has Nits Hello I have been selected to do a routing directorate “early” review of this draft. https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-trill-resilient-trees/ The routing directorate will, on request from the working group chair, perform an “early” review of a draft before it is submitted for publication to the IESG. The early review can be performed at any time during the draft’s lifetime as a working group document. The purpose of the early review depends on the stage that the document has reached. Document: draft-ietf-trill-resilient-trees-08.txt Reviewer: Loa Andersson Review Date: 2018-01-15 Intended Status: Proposed Standard Summary: Choose from this list... This document is basically ready for publication, but has very small nits that should be considered prior to being submitted to the IESG. Comments: I did an early review for the working group on version -05. What I've done this time is: - checked that my earlier comments been satisfactorily address (they have) - re-read the document, and only found very small nits Nits: The nits are only that abbreviations (e.g. DT) needs to be expanded the first time they occur in the document. Caveat: I agree with ALia that someone with more experience from p2mp protocols than I have should take a look at the document. YOu should also check the miscellaneous warnings from the nits tool. /Loa -- Loa Andersson email: loa@pi.nu Senior MPLS Expert Huawei Technologies (consultant) phone: +46 739 81 21 64