Re: [RTG-DIR] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-07.txt
Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> Fri, 12 January 2018 22:59 UTC
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Subject: Re: [RTG-DIR] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-07.txt
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Thanks, Nit fixed in editor's copy. If folks on the lpwan list provide me with sentences for example applications, I'd add that in. I agree it could be useful. Cheers, S. On 12/01/18 21:42, Andrew G. Malis wrote: > Hello, > > I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. > The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related > drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review. The purpose of > the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more > information about the Routing Directorate, please see ​ > http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir > > Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it > would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last > Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through > discussion or by updating the draft. > > Document: draft-ietf-lpwan-overview-07.txt > Reviewer: Andy Malis > Review Date: 12 January 2018 > IETF LC End Date: 16 January 2018 > Intended Status: Informational > > Summary: > No issues found. This document is ready for publication. > > Comments: > This is a well-written introduction to the subject area and relevant > technologies, especially for someone not otherwise familiar with the topic. > It is clearly ready for publication. > > Major Issues: > No major issues found. > > Minor Issues: > No minor issues found. > > Nits: > Section 2.4.1 includes a list of example applications, such as smart > municipality/city infrastructure monitoring and management, for the Wi-SUN > Alliance Field Area Network. It would be a very helpful addition to the > document if the other three described technologies (sections 2.1, 2.2, and > 2.3) could also include example applications, such as Remote Energy and > Heat Monitoring for LoRaWAN (I found that via a web search). > > Section 2.1.2 > s/o - Join Server:/o Join Server:/ > s/EU868MHz/EU 868MHz/ > > Thanks, > Andy > -- PGP key change time for me. New-ID 7B172BEA; old-ID 805F8DA2 expires Jan 24 2018. NewWithOld sigs in keyservers. Sorry if that mucks something up;-)
- [RTG-DIR] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-lpwan-overvie… Andrew G. Malis
- Re: [RTG-DIR] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-lpwan-ove… Stephen Farrell
- Re: [RTG-DIR] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-lpwan-ove… Stephen Farrell