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Re: [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir telechat review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sap-13

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From: mohamed.boucadair@orange.com
To: Mach Chen <mach.chen@huawei.com>, "rtg-dir@ietf.org" <rtg-dir@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir telechat review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sap-13
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Hi Mach, 

Thanks for the review. 

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Mach Chen via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
> Envoyé : mardi 17 janvier 2023 09:29
> À : rtg-dir@ietf.org
> Cc : draft-ietf-opsawg-sap.all@ietf.org; last-call@ietf.org;
> opsawg@ietf.org
> Objet : Rtgdir telechat review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sap-13
> 
> Reviewer: Mach Chen
> Review result: Ready
> 
> Hello,
> 
> I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this
> draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or
> routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and
> IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the
> review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs.
> For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see 
> http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir
> 
> Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing
> ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any
> other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to
> resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-sap-13
> Reviewer: Mach Chen
> Review Date: 2023/1/17
> Intended Status: Standards Track
> 
> Summary:
> No issues found. This document is ready for publication.
> 
> Comments:
> This document is clearly written and easy to read.
> I have reviewed version 04 of this document, and my comments have
> been addressed.
> 
> Major Issues:
> No major issues found.
> 
> Minor Issues:
> No minor issues found.
> 
> Nits:
> No nits found.
> 
> Best regards,
> Mach
> 


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