Re: [RTG-DIR] [Roll] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-roll-enrollment-priority-10
Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Wed, 14 February 2024 03:33 UTC
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To: Ron Bonica <rbonica@juniper.net>, Routing Over Low power and Lossy networks <roll@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [RTG-DIR] [Roll] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-roll-enrollment-priority-10
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Ron Bonica via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote: > - Either expand acronyms on their first use or include a Terminology > section okay, I've included some more in the Terminology section. I didn't find many places where terms are not expanded, except once in the Introduction where I use "6LR", which is not a common term outside of the RPL/6LowPAN world, and I've expanded it there. As for the anthropomorphic language, I will consider how and if I want to rewrite that. I will post a new version once I've dealt with the SECDIR review. -- Michael Richardson <mcr+IETF@sandelman.ca> . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting ) Sandelman Software Works Inc, Ottawa and Worldwide
- [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-roll-… Ron Bonica via Datatracker
- Re: [RTG-DIR] [Roll] Rtgdir early review of draft… Michael Richardson