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[RTG-DIR] RtgDir Early review: draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-yang

Mach Chen <mach.chen@huawei.com> Tue, 09 January 2018 10:54 UTC

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Hello 

I have been selected to do a routing directorate "early" review of this draft. 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/ draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-yang/ 

The routing directorate will, on request from the working group chair, perform an "early" review of a draft before it is submitted for publication to the IESG. The early review can be performed at any time during the draft's lifetime as a working group document. The purpose of the early review depends on the stage that the document has reached. As this document is in working group last call, my focus for the review was to determine whether the document is ready to be published. Please consider my comments along with the other working group last call comments. 

For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir 

Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-yang-09 
 Reviewer: Mach Chen 
 Review Date: 9 Jan 2018 
 Intended Status: Standards Track 

Summary:

No issues found. This documents is ready to proceed to the IESG.

BTW, idnits tool shows there are some warnings,  it's better to address them before publication.

Best regards,
Mach

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