[RTG-DIR] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-isis-rfc6326bis-01.txt

Ross Callon <rcallon@juniper.net> Mon, 20 January 2014 20:54 UTC

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Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate/routing.html

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-isis-rfc6326bis-01.txt
Reviewer: Ross Callon
Review Date: January 20, 2014
IETF LC End Date: January 22, 2014
Intended Status: Proposed Standard

Summary:   No issues found. This document is ready for publication.

Comments:  The document is very well written and is ready for publication. Thanks!

Major Issues:  No major issues found.

Minor Issues:  No minor issues found.

Nits:

Probably the reference to RFC 5342 should be replaced by a reference to 7042 (which obsoletes 5342).