[RTG-DIR] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-terminology-03

Susan Hares via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 04 November 2022 18:41 UTC

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Subject: [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-terminology-03

Reviewer: Susan Hares
Review result: Ready

This is a routing directorate review. Just like other directorate review, it
should be considered as part of the last call comments by the authors, the WG
shepherd, and the AD.

Status: no editorial or textual comments.
The changes from "master-slave" relationship to a "leader-follower" provide an
excellent recontextualization of the concepts.   The text is easy to read.  As
the document stands, I have to no additional comments.

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