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Re: [Rtg-ooam-dt] Comments on OOAM Requirements

"Carlos Pignataro (cpignata)" <cpignata@cisco.com> Thu, 17 March 2016 16:44 UTC

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From: "Carlos Pignataro (cpignata)" <cpignata@cisco.com>
To: "Nagendra Kumar Nainar (naikumar)" <naikumar@cisco.com>
Thread-Topic: [Rtg-ooam-dt] Comments on OOAM Requirements
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Cc: Gregory Mirsky <gregory.mirsky@ericsson.com>, "rtg-ooam-dt@ietf.org" <rtg-ooam-dt@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [Rtg-ooam-dt] Comments on OOAM Requirements
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Thank you — Just one comment, Greg — I am not sure that all those references are really all Normative, are they?

Thanks,

— Carlos.

> On Mar 17, 2016, at 12:36 PM, Nagendra Kumar Nainar (naikumar) <naikumar@cisco.com> wrote:
> 
> Thanks Greg. Fixed.
> 
> If there is no more comments, I will go ahead and submit it by EoB tomorrow.
> 
> Thanks,
> Nagendra
> 
> From: Gregory Mirsky <gregory.mirsky@ericsson.com <mailto:gregory.mirsky@ericsson.com>>
> Date: Thursday, March 17, 2016 at 12:26 PM
> To: Nagendra Kumar Nainar <naikumar@cisco.com <mailto:naikumar@cisco.com>>, "rtg-ooam-dt@ietf.org <mailto:rtg-ooam-dt@ietf.org>" <rtg-ooam-dt@ietf.org <mailto:rtg-ooam-dt@ietf.org>>
> Subject: RE: [Rtg-ooam-dt] Comments on OOAM Requirements
> 
> Hi Nagendra,
> thank you for you kind and careful consideration of the comments. I think we’re ready to submit our draft. Couple minor nits:
> ·         Abstract s/L3/Layer 3/
> ·         Introduction
> o   s/netwokring/networking/
> o   p.3 second para s/requirement/requirements/
> o   s/developing/developing/
> o   p.3 third para I think we don’t need to spell out OAM again as it already been introduced in the second para. ‘OAM’ shall do
> o   s/existing Overlay OAM tools/existing OAM tools/
> ·         REQ.6 s/i.e/i.e./
> 
> Regards,
>         Greg
> 
> From: Nagendra Kumar Nainar (naikumar) [mailto:naikumar@cisco.com <mailto:naikumar@cisco.com>]
> Sent: Thursday, March 17, 2016 6:14 AM
> To: Gregory Mirsky; rtg-ooam-dt@ietf.org <mailto:rtg-ooam-dt@ietf.org>
> Subject: Re: [Rtg-ooam-dt] Comments on OOAM Requirements
> 
> HI,
> 
> I have included the changes and uploaded back:
> 
> https://onedrive.live.com/?authkey=%21AiRsILA8bj-macQ&v=TextFileEditor&id=5D38B642A6E789F8%21132&cid=5D38B642A6E789F8&parId=5D38B642A6E789F8%21113 <https://onedrive.live.com/?authkey=%21AiRsILA8bj-macQ&v=TextFileEditor&id=5D38B642A6E789F8%21132&cid=5D38B642A6E789F8&parId=5D38B642A6E789F8%21113>
> 
> Thanks,
> Nagendra
> 
> From: Rtg-ooam-dt <rtg-ooam-dt-bounces@ietf.org <mailto:rtg-ooam-dt-bounces@ietf.org>> on behalf of Gregory Mirsky <gregory.mirsky@ericsson.com <mailto:gregory.mirsky@ericsson.com>>
> Date: Wednesday, March 16, 2016 at 4:13 PM
> To: "rtg-ooam-dt@ietf.org <mailto:rtg-ooam-dt@ietf.org>" <rtg-ooam-dt@ietf.org <mailto:rtg-ooam-dt@ietf.org>>
> Subject: [Rtg-ooam-dt] Comments on OOAM Requirements
> 
> Hi Nagendra,
> thank you for the great work you’re doing with the OOAM Requirements document.
> I’ve reviewed the version we have on the OneDrive and you’ll find changes I propose in the attached copy.
> 
>                 Regards,
>                                 Greg
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