RE: New Version Notification for draft-ding-rtgwg-arp-yang-model-01.txt

"dingxiaojian (A)" <dingxiaojian1@huawei.com> Thu, 12 April 2018 08:53 UTC

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From: "dingxiaojian (A)" <dingxiaojian1@huawei.com>
To: "Reshad Rahman (rrahman)" <rrahman@cisco.com>, "rtgwg@ietf.org" <rtgwg@ietf.org>
Subject: RE: New Version Notification for draft-ding-rtgwg-arp-yang-model-01.txt
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Hi Reshad,

     Sorry for delay.
     We have addressed all your comments except point 2. If we use the type ' ieee: vlanid ', we should import the corresponding YANG module which contains this type.
     We have found that ' ieee-types ' module has been emerged in the 01-version of draft-ietf-netmod-yang-types-01. However, it was deleted in the final version of RFC 6021.
      If we use the import like:

       import ietf-ieee-types {
    prefix ieee;
  }

The ARP YANG module cannot run correctly on the website http://www.yangvalidator.com/validator,  and has the following error:
error: module "ietf-ieee-types" not found in search path

If you have some good suggestions, pls help us to improve the draft. Thanks very much.

Xiaojian


-----Original Message-----
From: Reshad Rahman (rrahman) [mailto:rrahman@cisco.com] 
Sent: Tuesday, March 20, 2018 10:29 PM
To: dingxiaojian (A) <dingxiaojian1@huawei.com>;; rtgwg@ietf.org
Subject: Re: New Version Notification for draft-ding-rtgwg-arp-yang-model-01.txt

Hi Xiaojian,

Some comments:
- The uint64 counters should be changed to yang:counter64.
- For vlanid use ieee:vlanid instead of uint16
- You have "container global-static-table" which contains " list static-entry". Typically this is done by having the container being in plural form and the list in singular form, e.g. "container static-entries" and "list static-entry".
- Use yang-version 1.1 in ARP YANG module also
- Add reference statements for imports (see 6087bis) in both modules
- The revision statement "2017-10-18" doesn't match the date: 2018-01-27
- Add a note to RFC Editor to replace RFC XXX 

Regards,
Reshad.

´╗┐On 2018-02-28, 8:58 AM, "rtgwg on behalf of dingxiaojian (A)" <rtgwg-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of dingxiaojian1@huawei.com>; wrote:

    Hi all,
    
    -01 version addresses the comments received from WG mail list reviews .
    
    More comments are very welcomed. Thanks.
    
    Best regards,
    Xiaojian
    
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    Subject: New Version Notification for draft-ding-rtgwg-arp-yang-model-01.txt
    
    
    A new version of I-D, draft-ding-rtgwg-arp-yang-model-01.txt
    has been successfully submitted by Xiaojian Ding and posted to the IETF repository.
    
    Name:		draft-ding-rtgwg-arp-yang-model
    Revision:	01
    Title:		YANG Data Model for ARP
    Document date:	2018-02-27
    Group:		Individual Submission
    Pages:		17
    URL:            https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ding-rtgwg-arp-yang-model-01.txt
    Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ding-rtgwg-arp-yang-model/
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    Abstract:
       This document defines a specification of one YANG module and one
       submodule.  Together they form the Address Resolution Protocol (ARP)
       data model that performs as a guideline for configuring ARP
       capabilities on a system.  It is intended these modules be used by
       service providers who manipulate devices from different vendors in a
       standard way.
    
                                                                                      
    
    
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