Re: The RTGWG WG has placed draft-asechoud-rtgwg-qos-model in state "Candidate for WG Adoption"

tom petch <ietfa@btconnect.com> Fri, 21 June 2019 16:50 UTC

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From: tom petch <ietfa@btconnect.com>
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Subject: Re: The RTGWG WG has placed draft-asechoud-rtgwg-qos-model in state "Candidate for WG Adoption"
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The challenge I have in reviewing this I-D is the lack of references in
the YANG modules for the objects and actions defined therein.  I like to
have references since they tell me how much I should expect to
understand, how familiar I should be with the material.

Here we now have references for the YANG import statements (which is
good) but we should also have references for many of the YANG
statements; look for example at
    draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-yang-15
for an I-D with a comprehensive list of references in the YANG module.

It may be that here RFC 2697, RFC 2698, RFC3289 are all I need to know
but I would like to be told that before I start looking into the YANG.

Tom Petch

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> The RTGWG WG has placed draft-asechoud-rtgwg-qos-model in state
> Candidate for WG Adoption (entered by Jeff Tantsura)
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-asechoud-rtgwg-qos-model/
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