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Shepherd review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-bgp-pic-15

Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.ietf@gmail.com> Mon, 23 August 2021 05:15 UTC

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Subject: Shepherd review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-bgp-pic-15
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Hi Ahmed,

Thanks for updating the draft and addressing the review comments.

I’m updating the shepherd-up and noticed there is a warning from Idnits that still needs to be addressed:

tmp/draft-ietf-rtgwg-bgp-pic-15.txt:
tmp/draft-ietf-rtgwg-bgp-pic-15.txt(470): Found possible IPv6 address '2003:0051::' in position 9 in the paragraph; this doesn't match RFC 3849's suggested 2001:DB8::/32 address range or RFC 4193's Unique Local Address range FC00::/7.
tmp/draft-ietf-rtgwg-bgp-pic-15.txt(474): Found possible IPv6 address '2003:0113::' in position 9 in the paragraph; this doesn't match RFC 3849's suggested 2001:DB8::/32 address range or RFC 4193's Unique Local Address range FC00::/7.

Would you please fix this?

Thanks,
Yingzhen

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