Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rib-extend-19: (with COMMENT)

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Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rib-extend-19: No Objection

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# Éric Vyncke, INT AD, comments for draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rib-extend-18

Thank you for the work put into this document.

Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be
appreciated even if only for my own education).

Special thanks to Jeff Tantsura for the shepherd's detailed write-up including
the WG consensus **but** it lacks the justification of the intended status.

I hope that this review helps to improve the document,

Regards,

-éric

# COMMENTS

## Abstract

Should "data model" appear in `RFC 8349 defines the basic building blocks for
RIB` ?

## Section 3.2

Isn't the use of inet:ip-address (i.e., including the zone) redundant with
outgoing-interface ? Strongly suggest using inet:ip-address-no-zone