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Re: John Scudder's Discuss on draft-ietf-rtgwg-segment-routing-ti-lfa-13: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net> Wed, 17 April 2024 01:23 UTC

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From: John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net>
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Subject: Re: John Scudder's Discuss on draft-ietf-rtgwg-segment-routing-ti-lfa-13: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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While reviewing a different document that uses a similar “aims at“ construction, it occurred to me that,

On Apr 16, 2024, at 4:14 PM, John Scudder via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

  Segment Routing aims at supporting services with tight SLA guarantees
  [RFC8402].

… If you had written this slightly differently, I wouldn’t have had quite the same reaction. Specifically, if you had supplied the reference immediately after “Segment Routing,” as in,

  Segment Routing [RFC8402] aims at supporting services with tight SLA guarantees.

I wouldn’t have had the same “but that isn’t what RFC 8402 says at all“ response.

I suggest that change as a minimum edit. I continue to prefer my original suggestion of simply deleting the sentence, though, since it doesn’t seem to add anything to the specification. [1]

—John

[ 1] https://www.goodreads.com/quotes/19905-perfection-is-achieved-not-when-there-is-nothing-more-to

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